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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 06 February 2018 18:59 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09
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Meral, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Jan 26, 2018, at 6:37 PM, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2018-01-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-30
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> -[Page 5], Sec 2, "may replaced"---->"may be replaced"
> -Section 9.1, ref [BIER_ARCH] is now RFC
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> Best Regards,
> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
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