[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-06

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Thu, 27 June 2019 16:43 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-06
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-06

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-06-27
IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-28
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC .


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Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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