Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05

[Christian Huitema <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the feedback, Meral. I will start preparing an updated draft shortly.

-- Christian Huitema 

> On Sep 3, 2019, at 8:47 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for the review, Meral!
> 
> Authors, I'm going to go ahead and send this over to the IESG, but it will
> end up (most likely) on the September 19th telechat, so you have over a
> week to get a revision up with fixes.
> 
> -Ben
> 
>> On Tue, Sep 03, 2019 at 05:56:20AM +0000, Meral Shirazipour wrote:
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>> 
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05
>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
>> Review Date: 2019-09-02
>> IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-02
>> IESG Telechat date: NA
>> 
>> 
>> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.
>> Major issues:
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> Some may have already been reported…
>> 
>> -[Page 2], Section 1, "colocated"--->"collocated"
>> 
>> -[Page 3], Section 2, "mutiple"---->"multiple"
>> 
>> -[Page 3], Section 2.1, "fradulent"---->"fraudulent"
>> 
>> -[Page 4], Section 2.1, "MITM inspection", please spell out Man-In-The-Middle attack at first use
>> 
>> -[Page 7], Section 3.6, "is the the"---->"is the"
>> 
>> -[Page 10], Section 4.2, "ferver"---->"server"
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Best Regards,
>> Meral
>> ---
>> Meral Shirazipour
>> Ericsson
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