Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pim-registry-03.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 31 January 2011 23:43 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pim-registry-03.txt
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Hi Stig, Thanks, that looks fine to me. Regards Brian On 2011-02-01 09:48, Stig Venaas wrote: > Thanks Brian. I have now submitted revision 04 that I believe > takes care of your issues. See below. > > On 1/17/2011 5:23 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: >> Please see attached review. >> >> >> >> >> >> >> draft-ietf-pim-registry-03-carpenter.txt >> >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >> you may receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-pim-registry-03.txt >> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter >> Review Date: 2011-01-18 >> IETF LC End Date: 2011-01-25 >> IESG Telechat date: >> >> Summary: Ready >> -------- >> >> Editorial: >> ---------- >> >> Please expand "PIM" when first used. > > It has now been added to the list of abbreviations that don't > need to be expanded, so I decided to leave it as is. > >> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Experimental RFC: RFC 3973 >> >> You could make this an Informative reference; you have >> only set the bar at IETF Review, not Standards Action. > > I have now made the references informative. > > In addition I've listed the unassigned types, and added the sentence: > > The message type is a 4-bit integer with possible values from 0 to 15. > > Stig >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pim-reg… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pim… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pim… Stig Venaas
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pim… Brian E Carpenter