Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-05.txt
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Hiya, I had a read of -05. I didn't read (but just skimmed) all the other comments before doing that so apologies if my comments repeat (or utterly contradict:-) others that've been sent to the list already. Cheers, S. General: - Overall, I don't think this is ready. I do think it could be with some more work, maybe another rev or two. Or it might take longer, not sure. - If the authors didn't want to try aim for RG consensus on all of the text, then I think that'd make it easier to get an RFC published. I'd be ok with that, though I still think it'd need another rev or two (but the changes might be easier/less). - I'd argue to entirely re-do or delete section 5. I see why it's included but I think in the end it didn't work out to be useful in the same document as section 4. Detailed comments: - "undisputed" in the abstract is likely to be disputed:-) By readers, I mean. s/undisputed/seems evident to the authors/ or something might be better. - intro: the Callon quote could do with a reference so readers can go find more context if they want. The first sentence of that quote could mean lots of different things and I've no idea what exactly was meant - I'd ditch that sentence or maybe the entire quote. - intro: "affordances" - I've heard that term a number of times, but I don't think I really understand it. Also - how are users "shaped"? I think you could have said that "people are affected by" the technology, left it at that and been clearer. (I see you define that in section 2, so I do get it now that I've gotten that far. Still might be better to avoid the forward reference if possible.) - intro: does the document really "seek to answer" the question or rather try to explore the question? The latter seems more tractable. - intro: "The design of the Internet through protocols and standards..." That seems to ignore the "running code" aspect which is critical to understanding how the Internet has arisen and evolves. - The URL for [BramamI] doesn't work for me - my browser times out on that. (And why http and not https? :-) As below, it'd be better to say a bit more about i18n here - it's fairly obvious but no harm expanding the bullet beyond one word. - intro: The reference to RFC101 (better that than RFC0101 btw:-) is unclear to me. There are many occurrences of the word access in that RFC so what's meant by the bullet point here? It's not clear to me. - intro: same point about rfc49 - that has two mentions of "security" neither of which seem that relevant to this draft, so maybe say what/why that reference is for. (And there may be a better one, if what you've done is try find the earliest reference, that might not be the best thing.) - intro: same points for the other early RFC references and I guess [BramanII]. - intro: "This has been clearly shown in the work done by Sandra Braman..." - what "this" do you mean has been shown? It's not clear to this reader. - section 3: Suggest s/Answering/Exploring/ - section 4: RFC1087 says "The Internet is a national facility..." so I wonder if it's really so obvious a basis for the argument here. The problem is that 1087 kinda says "be ethical or we'll tell the Feds" and there aren't really equivalent Feds for today's Internet, so the sentence here could be a bit misleading. Maybe better to qualify the reference here with something like "... even if the Internet in 1989 was largely a US thing, similar problems and requirements for ethical behaviour ought still apply." Not sure. - 4.1: I note the references here are from 1991 and 1992 - isn't there a more recent expression of this position that could be quoted? It left me wondering if the referenced authors might have changed their positions since (I've no idea if they have or not, just wondering, as my own ideas now are not what they were then:-) - 4.2: This one is closest to my own position, but I wouldn't go along with "requires" which is far too strong - for me it's more like this position "implies that protocols could be evaluated for..." - 4.3: Even if the Internet is too complex, that doesn't imply anything for any one protocol. The rest of the 4.3 text also seems unclear to me. I'd say a rewrite of this section would be good. - 4.4: "The network..." do you mean the Internet or one of the networks that make up the Internet here? Or do you mean any network of networks? I assume you mean any network of networks, like the Internet but I'm not sure. - 4.4: This seems to finish early or something. The end of the section talks about social and technical but never says political so I'm unsure what a proponent of this position might believe vs. the other positions in section 4. - 4.5 (1): I've no clue what the emotional bias of a medium such as audio might be, or am I missing the point? - 4.5 (2): "speed of their information" is an odd phrase, and I'm not sure what's meant. - 4.5: IMO the raven process was an attempt to be technical and apolitical, at least as understood by some participants. It's likely incorrect to give the impression that everybody thinks that the raven process was "largely political." (I do agree that many people think that.) Similarly, while I agree that what "engendered" 7258 was Snowdonia, I do not agree that 7258 requires any justification that is non-technical (i.e. IMO 2804 and 7258 and 1984 can all be sufficiently justified on purely technical grounds). Again, I think the change to make here is to say that someone espousing the position of 4.5 might agree with the current text, but that those statements about 2804 and 7258 are not universally accepted. - 4.5: Neither 2804 nor 7258 are protocol specifications. For me that significantly weakens the overall argument proposed in 4.5. Surely soeomne who espouses this position could provide at least one actual protocol example? Presumably something that refers to 2804 or 7258 might suffice, but without that, there's a hole in the argument. (Not that I agree with the argument in 4.5, but I feel better disagreeing with something that isn't holed beneath the water line:-) - 4.5: "consumer class" seems wrong to me. I don't believe there's what I'd call a "consumer class" for NTP for example. I'm not clear from the phraseology as to whether the authors are asserting that espousing 4.5 means agreeing with Winner here or not. In any case, I think Winner is wrong here, for some protocols. - section 5: "the different existing positions" - that's a claim that secction 4 has the full set. My bet is that I could easily find an IETFer who espouses none of the above. s/the/some/ is better. Or you could say those are the postions that were considered in this work. - section 5: s/were created/are created/ and "formal" isn't quite right - TLS1.3 is getting closer to formal since bits of it were formally verified but it is not formally specified in one well-known sense of the term. s/formal// would be my suggestion. (I guess you just mean "written down" by this use of "formal" which seems unnecessary to me.) - section 5: "100% royalty-free"? What? I'm misundertanding something here. We had years of RSA and ECC being encumbered to the detriment of the Internet IMO, but 100% seems just wrong or else must be a badly stated statement of something else? - 5.1: "enhance competition" may be true sometimes but is a) not always true (I'll try assert NTP again as an example) and b) is far down my list of why to do work in the IETF, but is presented as if we all think this is the most important thing ever. - 5.1: the discussion of "de facto" seems broken to me. Consider RFC 3986 vs. whatwg for a real example that doesn't seem to fit your description. (And I barf again at the mention of competition law for such things as URL syntax:-) - 5.1: mention of ISO, BIS... etc with no references or URLs seems wrong. (I've no idea what ABNT is for example, but I guess it's not what first shows up in my search [1].) [1] https://acronyms.thefreedictionary.com/ABNT - 5.4: Are the authors agreeing with [Nadvi] or not? I think you ought be clear. I'm not sure I'd agree that applies to the IETF though, as IETF participants don't, in general, seem to me to be well-decscribed as "transnational stakeholders" even though some or many of them may be. I don't feel like one of those anyway;-) - 5.4: The big [RogersEden] quote goes against IETF lore. I forget where we have that written down in an RFC but I think we do. (Where "that" is "don't just end up with the union of the input proposals but instead try find the right outcome" or something like that. - Section 5 generally: I was left thinking "huh, what was the point of that section" when I finished reading that. I think you could mostly delete the entire section and be ok. - Section 6: I'd be happier if statements such as your opener did not depend on buying books. Haven't Russel or Abate ever written these arguments down in something openly accessible? (And BramanII is still a broken link.) I don't think you've made the case via text or accessible references that this opening conclusion statement is correct. (I may agree with it, but I don't think you can justify it based on this.) - Section 6: "undisputed" again - I dispute that that's the right term. - Section 6: I do not accept the [Russell] quote as being correct but haven't bought his/her book. I don't think you ought present that quote as being an accepted statement. - Section 6: I dispute that the implementation of protocols "is" political. I wrote some code last night for an I-D. That was not a politcal act (I assert). - Section 6: I dispute that "protocols can never be understood" without some inherently political framing. (If that's what you meant.) I can teach kids about TLS and they can understand the protocol without all the political add-ons. As it happens I do think they better understand what TLS is and how it's used, if I include some bits of that, but I don't believe it's needed for them to understand the protocol itself. - Section 6: I dunno if I agree about the future research.
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- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-… Niels ten Oever
- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-… Eliot Lear
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- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-… Niels ten Oever
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- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-… Eliot Lear
- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-… Ted Lemon
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- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-… Niels ten Oever
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- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-political-… Eliot Lear
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