[hrpc] My suggestion for the attribution paragraph

farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii@gmail.com> Thu, 11 March 2021 17:50 UTC

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Date: Thu, 11 Mar 2021 12:49:36 -0500
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Subject: [hrpc] My suggestion for the attribution paragraph
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Seems like the suggestion I made did not come through because I
strike-through
[image: Screen Shot 2021-03-11 at 12.44.34 PM.png]
 that didn't appear on the mailing list archive so I took a screenshot of
the changes I suggested which is attached.

I will rewrite it here.
Farzaneh