Re: [httpapi] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04

Erik Wilde <erik.wilde@dret.net> Wed, 15 February 2023 09:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [httpapi] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04
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hello mark.

On 2023-02-15 05:08, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> I like the suggestion below; anyone else have an issue with incorporating it?
> 
>>>   If an extension member (see Section 3.2) occurs in the Problem field,
>>>   its name MUST be compatible with the syntax of Dictionary keys (see
>>>   Section 3.2 of [STRUCTURED-FIELDS]) and the defining problem type
>>>   MUST specify a Structured Type to serialize the value into.

looks good to me. but what about replacing "Structured Type" (which is a 
term that's never used in that spec) with "Structured Data Type (see 
Section 3 of [STRUCTURED-FIELDS])"?

thanks and cheers,

dret.

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