Re: Nits and suggestions for draft-kazuho-h2-cache-digest

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Tue, 31 May 2016 06:25 UTC

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Hi!

Thanks for the feedback; it's really helpful.

WRT push workflows, I've been thinking about writing a document along those lines; I agree something like that is needed. 

Cheers,


> On 31 May 2016, at 4:19 PM, Alcides Viamontes E <alcidesv@zunzun.se> wrote:
> 
> Mark, I'm stalking your latest edits of this draft in Github and it's looking good.  I particularly like the inclusion of Etags. A server should be able to use those etags to decide if it needs to push something new, although there is no way to do that right now. Is there a document (besides the HTTP/2 RFC, which is a bit vague on this) detailing  the workflows with pushed representations, particularly what the browser is expected to do?
> 
> On Tue, May 31, 2016 at 7:24 AM, Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> wrote:
> 
> > On 15 May 2016, at 1:43 AM, Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> >> From small to large:
> >
> > Nit:
> >       2.  If "W" and "V" are equal, continue to the next "V".
> >
> > This should be next "W", I think.
> 
> There is no next W...
> 
> 
> > I think that Q would be better encoded as a series of 0 bits followed
> > by a 1 bit.  The reason I say that is that it is (marginally) easier
> > to generate the values then by masking in the R value in the right
> > place in a freshly calloc'd piece of memory.
> 
> I'm not fussed; Kazuho?
> 
> 
> > This document really needs to describe what the contents of the cache
> > digest are, and to describe how to decode the cache digest.  Without
> > defining what it means to receive and decode this information, this
> > specification almost says nothing at all.
> 
> Whatever happened to "left as an exercise to the reader?"
> 
> :)
> 
> Yes, we do.
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> 
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