Re: [I2nsf] WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-16

Hi Donald,
Thanks for your review and correction on
Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model Draft.

I will reflect your comment on the revision.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

2022년 8월 3일 (수) 오전 8:20, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>님이 작성:

> Hi,
>
> I have looked at this draft and support publication.
>
> However, I am doubtful about the following sentence:
>
>    The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a
>    Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system leads to a rapid
>    advance in the network industry.
>
> This seems a bit too broad. Perhaps
>
>    The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a
>    Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system supports rapid
>    deployment of newly developed functions.
>
>
> Thanks,
> Donald
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