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Re: [I2nsf] WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-16

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Tue, 27 September 2022 18:19 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2022 14:18:55 -0400
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-16
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Hi,

I have reviewed the changes from version -22 to -23 and think these
are improvements. I continue to support this draft.

Thanks,
Donald
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 Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA
 d3e3e3@gmail.com

On Thu, Aug 4, 2022 at 7:53 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
<jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Donald,
> Thanks for your review and correction on
> Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model Draft.
>
> I will reflect your comment on the revision.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>
> 2022년 8월 3일 (수) 오전 8:20, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>님이 작성:
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have looked at this draft and support publication.
>>
>> However, I am doubtful about the following sentence:
>>
>>    The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a
>>    Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system leads to a rapid
>>    advance in the network industry.
>>
>> This seems a bit too broad. Perhaps
>>
>>    The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a
>>    Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system supports rapid
>>    deployment of newly developed functions.
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Donald
>> ===============================
>>  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
>>  2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA
>>  d3e3e3@gmail.com
>>
>> Hello Working Group,
>>
>> Many thanks to the authors to address all the comments from YANG Doctor review.
>>
>> This email starts a three-weeks Working Group Last Call for  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/
>>
>> This poll runs until March 10, 2022.
>>
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>> Thank you.
>>
>> Linda
>>
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