Re: [I2nsf] WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-16

Hi Donald,
Thanks for your second review and kind support.

Best Regards,
Paul

2022년 9월 28일 (수) 오전 3:19, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>님이 작성:

> Hi,
>
> I have reviewed the changes from version -22 to -23 and think these
> are improvements. I continue to support this draft.
>
> Thanks,
> Donald
> ===============================
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> On Thu, Aug 4, 2022 at 7:53 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
> <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Donald,
> > Thanks for your review and correction on
> > Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model Draft.
> >
> > I will reflect your comment on the revision.
> >
> > Thanks.
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Paul
> >
> > 2022년 8월 3일 (수) 오전 8:20, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>님이 작성:
> >>
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> I have looked at this draft and support publication.
> >>
> >> However, I am doubtful about the following sentence:
> >>
> >>    The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a
> >>    Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system leads to a rapid
> >>    advance in the network industry.
> >>
> >> This seems a bit too broad. Perhaps
> >>
> >>    The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a
> >>    Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system supports rapid
> >>    deployment of newly developed functions.
> >>
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >> Donald
> >> ===============================
> >>  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> >>  2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA
> >>  d3e3e3@gmail.com
> >>
> >> Hello Working Group,
> >>
> >> Many thanks to the authors to address all the comments from YANG Doctor
> review.
> >>
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