Re: [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27
"Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com> Thu, 13 April 2023 12:37 UTC
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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Dirk Hugo <dirkvhugo@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm@ietf.org>, "i2nsf-chairs@ietf.org" <i2nsf-chairs@ietf.org>, "i2nsf@ietf.org" <i2nsf@ietf.org>, "dunbar.ll@gmail.com" <dunbar.ll@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27
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[Adding int-dir in cc] Thank you Dirk for the review, you may have noticed that I have referred to your review in my ballot. Regards -éric From: Dirk Hugo <dirkvhugo@gmail.com> Date: Thursday, 13 April 2023 at 11:38 To: "draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm@ietf.org>, "i2nsf-chairs@ietf.org" <i2nsf-chairs@ietf.org>, "i2nsf@ietf.org" <i2nsf@ietf.org>, "dunbar.ll@gmail.com" <dunbar.ll@gmail.com>, Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com> Subject: INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27 Dear all, enclosed please find my delayed (sorry!) review of the draft version 27. I have done the review on assignment by INT AD and think to draft is very useful though quite detailed and maybe sometimes repetitive in structure. What I missed is how multiple (malicious) MAC addresses or MAC address ranges could be provided - since it is mentioned that more than one may be in scope. I think it should proceed. Beyond that I only missed a reference to Figure 14 and found some nits as provided in attached IDdiff outcome. Also a consistent format of the "description" with or without final dot/fulstop would be nice - and explanation of SNS before sect. 7.2 Thanks to the authors and contributors for their effort! Best regards Dirk
- [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consu… Dirk Hugo
- Re: [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-c… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-c… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)