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Dirk Hugo <dirkvhugo@gmail.com> Thu, 13 April 2023 09:25 UTC

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Subject: [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27
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Dear all,
enclosed please find my delayed (sorry!) review of the draft version 27. I
have done the review on assignment by INT AD and think to draft is very
useful though quite detailed and maybe sometimes repetitive in structure.
What I missed is how multiple (malicious) MAC addresses or MAC address
ranges could be provided - since it is mentioned that more than one may be
in scope.
I think it should proceed.
Beyond that I only missed a reference to Figure 14 and found some nits as
provided in attached IDdiff outcome. Also a consistent format of the
"description" with or without final dot/fulstop would be nice - and
explanation of SNS before sect. 7.2
Thanks to the authors and contributors for their effort!
Best regards
Dirk

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