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Re: [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Thu, 13 April 2023 09:58 UTC

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From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Apr 2023 18:57:58 +0900
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To: Dirk Hugo <dirkvhugo@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27
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Hi Dirk,
I will address your comments on the revision of the I2NSF Consumer-Facing
Interface Data Model Draft.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 6:25 PM Dirk Hugo <dirkvhugo@gmail.com> wrote:

> Dear all,
> enclosed please find my delayed (sorry!) review of the draft version 27. I
> have done the review on assignment by INT AD and think to draft is very
> useful though quite detailed and maybe sometimes repetitive in structure.
> What I missed is how multiple (malicious) MAC addresses or MAC address
> ranges could be provided - since it is mentioned that more than one may be
> in scope.
> I think it should proceed.
> Beyond that I only missed a reference to Figure 14 and found some nits as
> provided in attached IDdiff outcome. Also a consistent format of the
> "description" with or without final dot/fulstop would be nice - and
> explanation of SNS before sect. 7.2
> Thanks to the authors and contributors for their effort!
> Best regards
> Dirk
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