Re: [I2nsf] Lars Eggert's Discuss on draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Sat, 03 June 2023 00:46 UTC

Return-Path: <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: i2nsf@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: i2nsf@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id CC46BC151554; Fri, 2 Jun 2023 17:46:03 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: 1.168
X-Spam-Level: *
X-Spam-Status: No, score=1.168 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, NORMAL_HTTP_TO_IP=0.001, NUMERIC_HTTP_ADDR=1.242, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_FREEMAIL_DOC_PDF=0.01, T_HK_NAME_FM_MR_MRS=0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, URIBL_DBL_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, URIBL_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, URI_DOTEDU=1.999] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id mD7SwGQLIxvP; Fri, 2 Jun 2023 17:45:58 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-pj1-x1030.google.com (mail-pj1-x1030.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::1030]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 (128/128 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 58A9CC15154C; Fri, 2 Jun 2023 17:45:58 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-pj1-x1030.google.com with SMTP id 98e67ed59e1d1-256931ec244so2307496a91.3; Fri, 02 Jun 2023 17:45:58 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20221208; t=1685753157; x=1688345157; h=cc:to:subject:message-id:date:from:in-reply-to:references :mime-version:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:reply-to; bh=peYrWefnePhJ4gSxyO6DBGVk+9dE1c33ce7PzS5NWVw=; b=aeGReAcqNc7S798yiT5OVEXMJZYqF4mTGoRNn2dAkncPZLGiKot4rq1WmtHbtssU3+ KujRc076BEtP9cslrAlAI0mBGJiINJl2OdK7TN58+9fIBJCBd1fl85qQAcNM2eo4ygCN nQxFMneERWKX+G1OpGs4bThoCXgA3h/+0xNw698DCcsapuRE0NkTrf5668MVTocDAj/c CH7gOlykA14rorJgRjN8caEr5Qs8sAM6/s/QzQWO9oXFglkIdDvTB0zt+fXNE76WrvYA y79KV3LEmKWPc1dPohIZOgAcDxyRjm3MPLVptTije646jWUhlBxW1qf4TPtmzecV6AAE TmuQ==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20221208; t=1685753157; x=1688345157; h=cc:to:subject:message-id:date:from:in-reply-to:references :mime-version:x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id :reply-to; bh=peYrWefnePhJ4gSxyO6DBGVk+9dE1c33ce7PzS5NWVw=; b=Ga9UZe3qEZ6EKJTsOTxc/F3vxJREyZb9xQaA73qGd79iZGBAuL3CXZn3oyv3Gb+IU4 GkEyIy/dY74QJZricBeAI3DZi2uli3dxPNdln4VomZcYGgOPxcuR/geofnJib3IWbQS3 ORi9atdHpRKO9MxYk+nZ45tWr7dEDZXsTUvVCjK8FoF/yaivB7H1vUZa73Rq7mHXdvw+ xxqdPEuGVyKa0vdo0ZtdjJKU1hZgNn8KtaTE0YgEiI8Sg8RgwtjKkt7hLSByk5Q8Sym8 5Xtqs9L9r3uFqys88RdfB2PU4XzHy74q/49GKEgvJnxYa/svJg29s2Nzn0TFem49c4RN QeGA==
X-Gm-Message-State: AC+VfDxJTdGWTu9Xj3rI3m2Lz56utIGPNYMXRJ3Gyk1sGOqdT/vDNDTl Or+2JMBfRLV2wXtkuImw7tFTjD5UAdXDq0uBcoQ=
X-Google-Smtp-Source: ACHHUZ6Y3xsaRRF46uF3nO0A40G0htl+e4kInXBV1OlF5ou5mVdgQ4EEgYH+5xzdDgU922X/C4wo63GaoiHCvp+zUiA=
X-Received: by 2002:a17:90a:310:b0:249:6098:b068 with SMTP id 16-20020a17090a031000b002496098b068mr1379955pje.45.1685753156406; Fri, 02 Jun 2023 17:45:56 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
References: <CAPK2DeysnMCpCOSbQZgKwoQJysVT4r_y8qVKFRo8RadGF6RvfA@mail.gmail.com> <BBE9341A-1593-430C-B523-FA1D8A643D82@eggert.org> <CAPK2DeyQg0CCoG1umHdhqU_qRQpP3AF1LcR90S5cK3+x0HqH8w@mail.gmail.com> <CAPK2DeyxwWv5u0OUO=Dt--+ig3kufHhvBvNU0M_5mtdFGHEpUQ@mail.gmail.com> <CAPK2DexfQ5SSFBKj83Onz4nE-4cK5PHvzk+uAL9Z8HDKWhuRaQ@mail.gmail.com> <2504b68e280c445fb5fbb94dd4256aff@BN2P110MB1107.NAMP110.PROD.OUTLOOK.COM> <CAPK2Dex0ne7++SRoVc90171d5HvQdYxN_SkQdrOHkHGLuU4_TQ@mail.gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <CAPK2Dex0ne7++SRoVc90171d5HvQdYxN_SkQdrOHkHGLuU4_TQ@mail.gmail.com>
From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 03 Jun 2023 09:45:19 +0900
Message-ID: <CAPK2DexHwewHrHB-DO0VPzConOZQAOD9H-tf_ng1bDOfiehVXQ@mail.gmail.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
Cc: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>, "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com>, "i2nsf@ietf.org" <i2nsf@ietf.org>, skku-iotlab-members <skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>
Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="0000000000001206e905fd2efe9b"
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/i2nsf/eQG1urIZixduYm6_VwgzRf1wQAs>
Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Lars Eggert's Discuss on draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
X-BeenThere: i2nsf@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39
Precedence: list
List-Id: "*I2NSF: Interface to Network Security Functions mailing list*" <i2nsf.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/i2nsf>, <mailto:i2nsf-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/i2nsf/>
List-Post: <mailto:i2nsf@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:i2nsf-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf>, <mailto:i2nsf-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 03 Jun 2023 00:46:03 -0000

Hi Roman,
Do you need more time to double-check the revision of the CFI draft?

You can use the attached revision letters to explain how I have addressed
the comments from the ADs
in the IESG telechat.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

2023년 5월 24일 (수) 오전 7:51, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>님이
작성:

> Hi Roman,
> I see.
>
> Thanks for your guidance and help throughout all the I2NSF YANG and
> Applicability documents.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>
> 2023년 5월 23일 (화) 오후 10:14, Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>님이 작성:
>
>> Hi Paul!
>>
>>
>>
>> Lars has updated his ballot to clear the DISCUSS on this document.
>>
>>
>>
>> The action now rests with me to review that all of the relevant COMMENTs
>> from the IESG have been addressed.
>>
>>
>>
>> Roman
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
>> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 23, 2023 5:29 AM
>> *To:* Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
>> *Cc:* Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
>> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>; Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>; The IESG <
>> iesg@ietf.org>; Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com>; i2nsf@ietf.org;
>> skku-iotlab-members <skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>
>> *Subject:* Re: [I2nsf] Lars Eggert's Discuss on
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>>
>>
>>
>> Hi Lars,
>>
>> I have addressed your further comments on the revision.
>>
>> Could you take a couple of minutes to take action on this revision
>> according to your comments?
>>
>> *https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-31
>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-31>*
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>>
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Paul
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> 2023년 5월 17일 (수) 오후 11:06, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com
>> >님이 작성:
>>
>> Lars,
>>
>> Could you take action on this revision according to your comments?
>>
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-31
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks in advance.
>>
>>
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Paul
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Mon, May 15, 2023 at 10:40 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
>> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Lars,
>>
>> I have reflected your comments on the revision of I2NSF Consumer-Facing
>> Interface YANG Data Model Draft:
>>
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-31
>>
>>
>>
>> I put my answers below with the prefix of [PAUL].
>>
>>
>>
>> On Mon, May 15, 2023 at 6:50 PM Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> wrote:
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>>
>>
>> the text in Section 4.4 still talks about hostnames.
>>
>>  => [PAUL] hostnames are removed for the URL-Group object.
>>
>>
>>
>> The example in Section 7 still doesn't use an RFC5737 example address.
>>
>>  => This version uses only three IPv4 documentation address blocks such
>> as
>>
>>       192.0.2.0/24, 198.51.100.0/24, and 203.0.113.0/24.
>>
>>        If there are non-documentation addresses in this draft, please let
>> me know.
>>
>>
>>
>>       Thanks a lot for the good feedback.
>>
>>
>>
>>       Best Regards,
>>
>>       Paul
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Lars
>>
>>
>>
>> On 11. May 2023, at 16:30, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> 
>>
>> Lars,
>>
>> Even though you are very busy, please take a look at the revision and
>> take action on our Consumer-Facing Interface Data Model draft:
>>
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/
>>
>>
>>
>> This draft is the last I2NSF draft to be standardized.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks in advance.
>>
>>
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Paul
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Tue, May 9, 2023 at 5:27 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
>> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Lars,
>>
>> Let me remind you of your action on this draft:
>>
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/
>>
>>
>>
>> We authors believe that we addressed your comments as much as possible.
>>
>>
>>
>> I hope this draft will move forward through your review and lifting up
>> your block.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>>
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Paul
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 9:45 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
>> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Lars,
>> I sincerely appreciate your comment to improve our Consumer-Facing
>> Interface YANG Data Model.
>>
>> I have addressed your comments with the following revision:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-28
>>
>> Also, two more revisions have been posted to address other comments from
>> other ADs.
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-29
>>
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-
>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-29>
>> 30
>>
>>
>> I attach the revision letters.
>>
>> If you have further questions and comments, please let me know.
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>> Best Regards,
>> Paul
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Apr 12, 2023 at 6:43 PM Lars Eggert via Datatracker <
>> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>>
>> Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27: Discuss
>>
>> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
>> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
>> introductory paragraph, however.)
>>
>>
>> Please refer to
>> https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/
>> for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>>
>>
>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/
>>
>>
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> DISCUSS:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27
>>
>> CC @larseggert
>>
>> Thanks to Roni Even for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
>> (
>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/PrQuAtGM5yKx1cs4Upt2cRel9IA
>> ).
>>
>> ## Discuss
>>
>> ### Section 4.4, paragraph 3
>> ```
>>      URL:      This field represents the URL or hostname.
>> ```
>> Not a YANG expert, but I thought an inet:uri had to be an actual URI and
>> hence
>> cannot simply be a hostname string?
>>
>> ### Section 7.1, paragraph 7
>> ```
>>      3.  The "https://www.sns-example1.com/" and "https://www.sns-
>>          example2.com/" URLs are labeled as "sns-websites".
>>
>>      4.  The "sip:alice@atlanta.com", "sip:bob@203.0.113.15", and
>>          "sip:carol@chicago.com" SIP identities are labeled as
>> "malicious-
>>          id".
>> ```
>> Use actual RFC2606 example domain names and RFC5737 example IP addresses.
>> Also in the XML in Figure 19 of course.
>>
>> ### Section 10.1, paragraph 43
>> ```
>>      [MISPCORE] Dulaunoy, A. and A. Iklody, "MISP Core",
>>                 commit 051e33b6711a660faf81733d825f1015aa0d301b, February
>>                 2022, <https://github.com/MISP/misp-
>>                 rfc/blob/051e33b6711a660faf81733d825f1015aa0d301b/misp-
>>                 core-format/raw.md.html>.
>>
>>      [OPENIOC]  Gibb, W., "OpenIOC 1.1 DRAFT",
>>                 commit d42a8777708e171f8bdd3c2c9f8590c83488285d, August
>>                 2013, <https://github.com/fireeye/OpenIOC_1.1/blob/
>>                 d42a8777708e171f8bdd3c2c9f8590c83488285d/schemas/ioc.xsd>.
>> ```
>> For discussion in the IESG. I don't think GitHub commits are appropriate
>> normative references.
>>
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> ## Comments
>>
>> ### DOWNREFs
>>
>> Possible DOWNREF from this Standards Track doc to `[OPENIOC]`. If so, the
>> IESG
>> needs to approve it.
>>
>> Possible DOWNREF from this Standards Track doc to `[MISPCORE]`. If so,
>> the IESG
>> needs to approve it.
>>
>> ### Inclusive language
>>
>> Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and
>> more
>> guidance:
>>
>>  * Term `traditional`; alternatives might be `classic`, `classical`,
>> `common`,
>>    `conventional`, `customary`, `fixed`, `habitual`, `historic`,
>>    `long-established`, `popular`, `prescribed`, `regular`, `rooted`,
>>    `time-honored`, `universal`, `widely used`, `widespread`
>>
>> ## Nits
>>
>> All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may
>> choose to
>> address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
>> automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so
>> there
>> will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what
>> you
>> did with these suggestions.
>>
>> ### Typos
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 99
>> ```
>> -           for an IP address, such as IPv4 adress and IPv6 address.";
>> +           for an IP address, such as IPv4 address and IPv6 address.";
>> +                                             +
>> ```
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 121
>> ```
>> -                   category such as SNS sites, game sites, ecommerce
>> +                   category such as SNS sites, game sites, e-commerce
>> +                                                            +
>> ```
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 135
>> ```
>> -               gaming sites, ecommerce sites";
>> +               gaming sites, e-commerce sites";
>> +                              +
>> ```
>>
>> ### URLs
>>
>> These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS:
>>
>>  *
>> http://www.iso.org/iso/home/standards/country_codes/iso-3166-1_decoding_table.htm
>>  * http://www.iso.org/iso/home/standards/country_codes.htm#2012_iso3166-2
>>
>> ### Grammar/style
>>
>> #### Section 3.1, paragraph 1
>> ```
>> sf-capability-data-model]. Case (anti-virus): This field represents the
>> conf
>>                                  ^^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> This word is normally spelled as one.
>>
>> #### Section 3.2, paragraph 1
>> ```
>>  This information describes a caller id or receiver id in order to
>> prevent an
>>                                      ^^
>> ```
>> This abbreviation for "identification" is spelled all-uppercase.
>>
>> #### Section 3.2, paragraph 1
>> ```
>> on describes a caller id or receiver id in order to prevent any exploits
>> (or
>>                                      ^^
>> ```
>> This abbreviation for "identification" is spelled all-uppercase.
>>
>> #### Section 3.2, paragraph 3
>> ```
>> ow-rate-threshold? uint64 | +--rw anti-virus | | +--rw profile* string |
>> | +-
>>                                   ^^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> This word is normally spelled as one.
>>
>> #### Section 3.2, paragraph 9
>> ```
>> he Action object SHALL have following information: Primary-action: This
>> fiel
>>                             ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> The article "the" may be missing.
>>
>> #### Section 4, paragraph 3
>> ```
>> , e.g., 'Dublin', 'New York', and 'Sao Paulo'. Range-ipv4-address: This
>> repre
>>                                    ^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> Did you mean "São Paulo" (= city in Brazil)?
>>
>> #### Section 4.5, paragraph 1
>> ```
>> is field is not mandatory but recommended to be used as it is helpful for
>> fut
>>                               ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> The verb "recommended" is used with the gerund form.
>>
>> #### Section 5.1, paragraph 4
>> ```
>> er-Facing Interface, this document provide examples for security policy
>> rules
>>                                    ^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> The verb "provide" is plural. Did you mean: "provides"? Did you use a verb
>> instead of a noun?
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 68
>> ```
>> nclude 'Dublin', 'New York', and 'Sao Paulo'."; } uses ip-address-info{
>> refin
>>                                   ^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> Did you mean "São Paulo" (= city in Brazil)?
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 94
>> ```
>> ck mitigation."; } } } container anti-virus { description "A condition
>> for an
>>                                  ^^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> This word is normally spelled as one.
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 94
>> ```
>> us { description "A condition for anti-virus"; leaf-list profile { type
>> strin
>>                                   ^^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> This word is normally spelled as one.
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 97
>> ```
>> hs are filenames/paths to be excluded and relative ones are interpreted
>> as gl
>>                                      ^^^^
>> ```
>> Use a comma before "and" if it connects two independent clauses (unless
>> they
>> are closely connected and short).
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 114
>> ```
>> ed as a binary to accommodate any kind of a payload type such as HTTP,
>> HTTPS,
>>                                   ^^^^^^^^^
>> ```
>> If "kind" is a classification term, "a" is not necessary. Use "kind of".
>> (The
>> phrases "kind of" and "sort of" are informal if they mean "to some
>> extent".).
>>
>> #### Section 6.1, paragraph 114
>> ```
>> 5 bytes of the payload. This field accept values greater than or equal to
>> th
>>                                    ^^^^^^
>> ```
>> The verb "accept" is plural. Did you mean: "accepts"? Did you use a verb
>> instead of a noun?
>>
>> ## Notes
>>
>> This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can
>> use the
>> [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
>> individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the
>> [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].
>>
>> [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
>> [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
>> [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool
>>
>>
>>
>> _______________________________________________
>> I2nsf mailing list
>> I2nsf@ietf.org
>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf
>>
>> --
>>
>> ===========================
>> Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
>> Associate Professor
>>
>> Director at SKKU Open Source Software Center
>>
>> Department of Computer Science and Engineering
>> Sungkyunkwan University
>> Office: +82-31-299-4957
>> Email: pauljeong@skku.edu, jaehoon.paul@gmail.com
>> Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php
>> <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
>>
> --
> ===========================
> Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
> Associate Professor
> Director at SKKU Open Source Software Center
> Department of Computer Science and Engineering
> Sungkyunkwan University
> Office: +82-31-299-4957
> Email: pauljeong@skku.edu, jaehoon.paul@gmail.com
> Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php
> <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
>