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Hello,

This module does not provide sufficient description/reference text. For example:
- What is a "VLAN ID"?
- What is a "TRILL Nickname"?
- What is a "VxLAN Network Indentifier"?
- What is "QinQ"?
- What is a "Shared Risk Link Group"?
- Where does "Maximum frame size" begin and end for a given media?

If the author prefers to avoid a description, at least a reference should be provided so that the normative definition can be determined.

Rodney Cummings

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> topology-10.txt
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>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data
> Center Networks
>         Authors         : Yan Zhuang
>                           Danian Shi
>                           Rong Gu
>                           Hariharan Ananthakrishnan
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-
> 10.txt
> 	Pages           : 31
> 	Date            : 2018-06-29
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> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data
>    Center Networks and it represents only one possible view of the dc
>    fabric.
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