Re: [icnrg] progressing draft-irtf-icnrg-scenarios

Kostas Pentikousis <k.pentikousis@eict.de> Fri, 08 August 2014 11:24 UTC

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From: Kostas Pentikousis <k.pentikousis@eict.de>
To: Dirk Kutscher <Dirk.Kutscher@neclab.eu>
Date: Fri, 08 Aug 2014 13:24:07 +0200
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Dear Dirk, all,

| I would like to progress publication of the scenarios draft.

Thank you very much for the go ahead Dirk.

| 
| In order to do that, I would like to ask for the following changes in
| the document:
| 
| - abstract: mention that this is an ICNRG product

Done.

| - introduction: add paragraph describing the level of support for
| publication of the document, i.e., something like  "this document
| represents the consensus of the ICN RG"
| - somewhere at beginning: describe breadth of review the draft has
| received
| 
| See https://trac.tools.ietf.org/group/irtf/trac/wiki/IRTF-RFCs for
| details.

I also had a look at a few recent IRTF Stream RFCs in order to make sure we're in line with earlier publications. 

The document is now updated: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-icnrg-scenarios/. 

Best regards,

Kostas