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Dirk Kutscher <Dirk.Kutscher@neclab.eu> Thu, 07 August 2014 13:15 UTC

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Hi draft authors, all,

I would like to progress publication of the scenarios draft.

In order to do that, I would like to ask for the following changes in the document:

- abstract: mention that this is an ICNRG product
- introduction: add paragraph describing the level of support for publication of the document, i.e., something like
 "this document represents the consensus of the ICN RG" 
- somewhere at beginning: describe breadth of review the draft has received

See https://trac.tools.ietf.org/group/irtf/trac/wiki/IRTF-RFCs for details.

Thanks,
Dirk

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