[Idr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 14 May 2021 11:21 UTC

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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: No Objection

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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Special thanks to Susan Hares for her recent and detailed shepherd's write up.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated).

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

Is there any reason why the shepherd is not acknowledged in the document ?

-- Section 2 --
Strongly suggest s/protocol port numbers/protocol or port numbers/

Please expand "RR" at first use.

-- Section 4.2 --
Suggest to add also a reference to section 4 of RFC 8955 rather than "[RFC8955] states:"