Re: [Idr] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4271 (6256)

John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> Fri, 14 August 2020 14:38 UTC

From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
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Sounds right.

—John

> On Aug 12, 2020, at 2:36 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
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> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC4271,
> "A Border Gateway Protocol 4 (BGP-4)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6256__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!SpELvNfLhQUuQ203AvJuTme321r3LEellWBGShISiC4EiRgcaRihajHiLAC-cQ$
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Anton Yushkov <antonyyushkov@gmail.com>
> 
> Section: 5.1.3
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> 3) When sending a message to an external peer X, and the peer is
> multiple IP hops away from the speaker (aka "multihop EBGP"):
> ...
> - By default, the BGP speaker SHOULD use the IP address of the interface that the speaker uses in the NEXT_HOP attribute to establish the BGP connection to peer X.
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> 3) When sending a message to an external peer X, and the peer is
> multiple IP hops away from the speaker (aka "multihop EBGP"):
> ...
> - By default, the BGP speaker SHOULD use the IP address of the interface that the speaker uses to establish the BGP connection to peer X in the NEXT_HOP attribute.
> 
> Notes
> -----
> confusing incorrect word order:
> reading the original text, the reader might think that the BGP speaker is using the NEXT_HOP attribute as part of establishing a connection with the peer
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC4271 (draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-26)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : A Border Gateway Protocol 4 (BGP-4)
> Publication Date    : January 2006
> Author(s)           : Y. Rekhter, Ed., T. Li, Ed., S. Hares, Ed.
> Category            : DRAFT STANDARD
> Source              : Inter-Domain Routing
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

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