[Idr] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: (with COMMENT)

Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com> Thu, 20 December 2018 13:38 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: No Objection

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Hello,

thank you for this document.
I only have caught nits.

Abstract:
s/Traffic Engineering Extensions/Traffic Engineering Metric Extensions/

To have a naming consistent with your references I'd do,
in section 2 and in IANA Section:
s/1120              Unidirectional Bandwidth Utilization/1120             
Unidirectional Utilized Bandwidth/ and in Section 2.8: s/| Unidirectional
Bandwidth Utilization  |   39     |     33         |/| Unidirectional Utilized
Bandwidth  |   39     |     33         |/

Not all figures are numbered. Either have numbering for all or for none. Since
you never reference them, maybe you don't need numbering. But if you keep it
then:
   where:
                                 Figure X
   Type: xxxx

should become:
                                 Figure X
   where:
   Type: xxxx

[Idr] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ie… Martin Vigoureux
Re: [Idr] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draf… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)