Opsdir last call review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-05

Carlos Martinez <carlosm3011@gmail.com> Thu, 12 October 2017 17:56 UTC

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From: Carlos Martinez <carlosm3011@gmail.com>
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Subject: Opsdir last call review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-05
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Reviewer: Carlos Martinez
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

With the caveat that I'm not an expert, I've found this document to be READY.

I have found it well-written (those parts that require actual prose) and
adequately referenced since it relies heavily on other documents.

Authors, please do remember to remove all non-final text before re-sending.

Thanks!

/Carlos

Opsdir last call review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049b… Carlos Martinez
RE: Opsdir last call review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8… Qin Wu