Re: [alto] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08

"Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)" <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Mon, 08 May 2017 22:52 UTC

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Subject: Re: [alto] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08
From: "Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)" <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
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Thanks!

> Am 09.05.2017 um 00:39 schrieb Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>om>:
> 
> Yes, I believe that the changes made were sufficient.
> 
> On 8 May 2017 at 22:15, Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF) <ietf@kuehlewind.net> wrote:
>> Hi Martin,
>> 
>> just to double check: do you think this document is ready now and all your comments have been addressed?
>> 
>> Mirja
>> 
>> 
>>> Am 27.04.2017 um 13:57 schrieb Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>om>:
>>> 
>>> Hello Martin,
>>> 
>>> I just posted an update where the " Requirements Language" text has been moved in a section 1.1.
>>> As I saw it on a number of other ietf drafts, I also added the sentence
>>> "When the words appear in lower case, their natural language meaning is used."
>>> 
>>> The update and status are available at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost/
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> Sabine
>>> 
>>> 
>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>> From: Martin Thomson [mailto:martin.thomson@gmail.com]
>>>>> Sent: 26 April 2017 08:39
>>>>> To: Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-
>>>>> bell-labs.com>
>>>>> Cc: art@ietf.org; alto@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-alto-multi-
>>>>> cost.all@ietf.org
>>>>> Subject: Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08
>>>>> 
>>>>> On 26 April 2017 at 03:26, Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay)
>>>>> <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>> This document doesn't cite RFC 2119, but it uses the keywords.
>>>>>> [SR     ] RFC 2119 is cited on page 1, section " Requirements Language" and
>>>>> section "9.1.  Normative References". Should it be referenced elsewhere?
>>>>> 
>>>>> The convention is to put those in the body, I missed it in the boilerplate.
>>>>> 
>>>>> I skimmed the other changes, and they look fine.
>> 
> 
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