RE: [Gen-art] gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-04

"Lizhong Jin" <lizho.jin@gmail.com> Sat, 21 December 2013 17:01 UTC

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Subject: RE: [Gen-art] gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-04
Date: Sun, 22 Dec 2013 01:01:26 +0800
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Hi Jari, Roni,
Thank you very much for the comments. Is it OK for you to change as below:
Section 3.1, "If the peer has not advertised the corresponding capability, then label messages using the HSMP FEC Element SHOULD NOT (as described in [RFC6388] section 2.1) be sent to the peer."
It is better to have the same description with RFC6388 here, so as to avoid any confusion.

Regards
Lizhong


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.arkko@piuha.net]
> Sent: Thursday, December 19, 2013 10:40 PM
> To: Roni Even
> Cc: 'Lizhong Jin'; draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp.all@tools.ietf.org;
> ietf@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-
> 04
> 
> Roni, Lizhong,
> 
> Thank you very much Roni for your review. And Lizhong for the updates.
> 
> (By the way, I saw no change regarding 3.1; I do agree with Roni that
> adding some explanation might be useful. This is just a comment,
> however - I will let you decide how to deal with it.)
> 
> Jari