Re: Last Call: <draft-ishikawa-yrpunl-ucode-urn-01.txt> (A URN Namespace For The ucode) to Informational RFC

Mykyta Yevstifeyev <evnikita2@gmail.com> Tue, 17 January 2012 18:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-ishikawa-yrpunl-ucode-urn-01.txt> (A URN Namespace For The ucode) to Informational RFC
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Hello,

Having reviewed this document, I think there is no problem with its
publication.  Several tiny comments:

1) "RFID" in the Introduction needs expanding at first use.

2)   ucode-value = 32hex-decimal
   hex-decimal = "0" / "1" / "2" / "3" / "4" / "5" / "6" / "7" /
                 "8" / "9" / "A" / "B" / "C" / "D" / "E" / "F"

may be changed to:

   ucode-value = 32HEXDIG

and that's RFC 5234 which defines <HEXDIG> so you may refer to it later.

3)

Rules for lexical equivalence:

   The entire UCODE-URN is case-sensitive.

This is at least wrong for the first three chars in URN (the URI
scheme name "urn"), that is case-insensitive as per RFC 3986.  What's
the reason for setting such regulation?

Mykyta Yevstifeyev

2012/1/17 The IESG <iesg-secretary@ietf.org>:
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> The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider
> the following document:
> - 'A URN Namespace For The ucode'
>  <draft-ishikawa-yrpunl-ucode-urn-01.txt> as an Informational RFC
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> Abstract
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>   This document describes a URN (Uniform Resource Name) namespace for
>   ucode, an identifier system for objects and places,  used in various
>   applications for the ubiquitous computing or the Internet of Things.
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> The file can be obtained via
> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ishikawa-yrpunl-ucode-urn/
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