Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-in-udp-09

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 04 January 2015 15:12 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
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Document:  draft-ietf-mpls-in-udp-09

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015-1-4

IETF LC End Date: 2015-1-12

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

My comments on the 04 version were addressed.

 

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