RE: How to get feedback on published RFCs [resending as plaintext]

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Tue, 19 July 2016 14:52 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com>, IETF <ietf@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: How to get feedback on published RFCs [resending as plaintext]
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Hi,

A couple of initial comments:

Q1:

In section3, the text says:

   "-  Providing feedback on correctness and pointing out errors.  This
      is a much easier process than submitting errata, and as such would
      likely yield a larger number of corrections."

I assume that, if something is to be fixed, an errata will eventually have to be created? I.e. the annotation will not be a formal correction.


Q2:

Keep in mind that some text in an RFC may not be valid anymore, if:

1)	It has already been changed in an errata; or
2)	It has been updated in another RFC ("this RFC updates section X of RFC Y")

Now, anyone who is about to give comments should obviously make sure whether the affected parts have been updated. But, assuming I want to comment on text that exists in an errata, how does that work?


Regards,

Christer





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From: ietf [mailto:ietf-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Yaron Sheffer
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Subject: How to get feedback on published RFCs [resending as plaintext]

Once an RFC is published, there is essentially no way for readers to provide feedback: what works, what are the implementation pitfalls, how does the document relate to other technologies or even to other RFCs.

We IETF insiders usually know what is the relevant working group, and can take our feedback there. Non-insiders though don't have any contact point, and so will most likely keep their feedback to themselves. These non-IETFers are the target audience of our documents! Unfortunately, our so-called "Requests for Comments" are anything but an invitation to submit comments.

There is a number of tools now that allow "web annotations" (i.e.,
comments) on various published documents. I submitted a draft [1] recently that proposes to enable annotations on the "tools" version of our RFCs. Technically, this is a trivial change. From a process point of view it is more complicated and merits discussion on this list. Sec. 6 of the draft allows you to see for yourself what such annotations would look like.

I am here in Berlin if people prefer to talk it over in person. 
Otherwise, please reply on this list.

Thanks,
     Yaron

[1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sheffer-ietf-rfc-annotations-00