Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12
Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu> Wed, 28 August 2013 14:20 UTC
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Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12
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Roni, Thanks for an insightful review, you have captured much of what we been struggling with when it comes to the IANA allocations. On 2013-08-28 15:06, Roni Even wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12 > Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > I am not clear on the sub-TLV in section 6.2 > > 1. If a new sub-TLV is defined for TLV type 1 do they need also to be > added to TLV type 21. Yes the document says "Directly copied from TLV Type 1, MUST NOT be assigned" the intention is that this applies to future sub-TLVs also. I guess it could be changed to "Directly copied from TLV Type 1 (including future allocations for TLV Type 1, MUST NOT be assigned" if that makes thing clearer. > This should be clear, and if there is some > relation I think it should be reflected in the IANA registry for TLV > type 1 I guess that makes sense - but it has not been the what we've done earlier - I think we could add this where needed by directly communicate this to IANA. > 2. For the vendor or private use why a difference policy than the rest > of the sub-TLV registry We don't assign vendor private use at all, so by default it is different. I don't see that it could be different. /Loa > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. In section 3.4 I assume that “TC” is traffic class. It will be good > to expand and have reference. > -- Loa Andersson email: loa@mail01.huawei.com Senior MPLS Expert loa@pi.nu Huawei Technologies (consultant) phone: +46 739 81 21 64
- Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-… Roni Even
- Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Loa Andersson
- RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Roni Even
- RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Mach Chen
- RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Roni Even
- RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Mach Chen
- RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Roni Even
- Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Loa Andersson
- RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-p… Roni Even
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