Re: [EAI] I-D Action: draft-ietf-eai-rfc5337bis-dsn-03.txt

[Tony Hansen <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the review Chris. More below.

On 7/28/2011 6:30 PM, Chris Newman wrote:
> --On July 11, 2011 16:12:13 -0700 [e-mail] wrote:
>>     Title           : Internationalized Delivery Status and Disposition 
> Notifications
>>     Author(s)       : Tony Hansen
>>                           Chris Newman
>>                           Alexey Melnikov
>>     Filename        : draft-ietf-eai-rfc5337bis-dsn-03.txt
>>     Pages           : 21
>>     Date            : 2011-07-11
>
> Although I wrote the bulk of the initial text, I am no longer primary 
> editor and have not reviewed this since a draft of 5337 so was able to 
> look at it with fresh eyes. I believe this is ready for last call and 
> ready to publish. Some very minor issues:
>
> 1. The references to UTF8SMTP need to be changed to the UTF8SMTPbis 
> placeholder throughout the document.

Where is there an instance where it does *not* reference 5336bis?

> 2. My company affiliation is out-of-date. It is now Oracle (postal 
> address is still valid).

fixed

> 3. I suggest renaming utf-8-addr-xtext to utf-8-addr-7bit to improve 
> readability.

Seems reasonable.

> 4. Section 6.2 should say that RFC XXXX replaces the reference to RFC 
> 5337 in the registry.

Okay.

> I saw no other issues.
>
>         - Chris

Merci!

     Tony Hansen