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Re: [EAI] I-D Action: draft-ietf-eai-rfc5337bis-dsn-03.txt

Chris Newman <chris.newman@oracle.com> Thu, 28 July 2011 23:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [EAI] I-D Action: draft-ietf-eai-rfc5337bis-dsn-03.txt
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--On July 11, 2011 16:12:13 -0700 internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 	Title           : Internationalized Delivery Status and Disposition 
Notifications
> 	Author(s)       : Tony Hansen
>                           Chris Newman
>                           Alexey Melnikov
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-eai-rfc5337bis-dsn-03.txt
> 	Pages           : 21
> 	Date            : 2011-07-11

Although I wrote the bulk of the initial text, I am no longer primary 
editor and have not reviewed this since a draft of 5337 so was able to look 
at it with fresh eyes. I believe this is ready for last call and ready to 
publish. Some very minor issues:

1. The references to UTF8SMTP need to be changed to the UTF8SMTPbis 
placeholder throughout the document.

2. My company affiliation is out-of-date. It is now Oracle (postal address 
is still valid).

3. I suggest renaming utf-8-addr-xtext to utf-8-addr-7bit to improve 
readability.

4. Section 6.2 should say that RFC XXXX replaces the reference to RFC 5337 
in the registry.

I saw no other issues.

		- Chris

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