[Int-dir] Re: Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-pim-3376bis-11

["Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <[e-mail]>]

Thank you, Bob, for your review.

As you may have seen in my ballot, I balloted NoObjection and referred to your review.

Regards

-éric


From: Bob Halley via Datatracker <[e-mail]>
Date: Sunday, 28 July 2024 at 22:56
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Cc: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
Subject: [Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-pim-3376bis-11
Reviewer: Bob Halley
Review result: Ready

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-pim-3376bis-11. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors.
Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they
would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along
with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on
the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as YES.

I did not see any issues of significance in the document.

The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements)
with the document:

6.4.2 paragraph 8 duplicates a word in the text "Section Section 6.6.3".


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