Re: [Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com>, "int-dir@ietf.org" <int-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10
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Thank you, Haoyu, for your review.

I added a reference to your review in my DISCUSS ballot.

Regards

-éric

From: Int-dir <int-dir-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Haoyu Song via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Tuesday, 21 November 2023 at 01:33
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Cc: bier@ietf.org <bier@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-bier-evpn.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-bier-evpn.all@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org>
Subject: [Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-evpn-10
Reviewer: Haoyu Song
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer for this draft. Please treat the comments
just like any other last call comments.

I won't repeat the nits other reviewers have pointed out. Based on my general
knowledge on BIER and EVPN, I think the document is ready for publication.

I’m confused by the following grammar. Who deliver to whom? Please consider
rephrasing to make it clearer. "For an inclusive PMSI, the set of BFERs to
deliver traffic to includes … For a selective PMSI, the set of BFERs to deliver
traffic to includes …"



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