Re: [Internetgovtech] [Ianaplan] FW: ICG Charter Open for Public Comment

Richard:

I do not understand your suggested edits to the first sentence.  At the start, you seem to agree with the ICG that there is one (and only one) deliverable.  Then, as your revised sentence goes on, your create a second deliverable, a final report.

Russ

On Aug 9, 2014, at 2:32 AM, Richard Hill wrote:

> Dear Alissa,
>  
> Thank you for this.
>  
> Please find attached my comments on the draft ICG charter.
> 
> Best,
> Richard
>  
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ianaplan [mailto:ianaplan-bounces@ietf.org]On Behalf Of Alissa Cooper
> Sent: vendredi, 8. août 2014 23:32
> To: ianaplan@ietf.org; internetgovtech@iab.org
> Subject: [Ianaplan] FW: ICG Charter Open for Public Comment
> 
> FYI.
> 
> There has been some discussion of the ICG charter on internetgovtech@iab.org, and I think it’s the preference of Jari and myself for further IETF/IAB discussion of the charter to happen there so we can coalesce and reflect the results of that discussion back to the ICG. But if people would rather submit comments individually and directly to the ICG, information about how to do so is below.
> 
> Alissa
> 
> On 8/8/14, 2:12 PM, "Grace Abuhamad" <grace.abuhamad@icann.org> wrote:
> 
> The ICG has opened a public comment period for their charter that will end on 15 August 2014 at 23:59 UTC.
> 
> Public comment submission process links:
> 
> Comment submission: icg-forum@icann.org
> List of comments submitted via this site: http://forum.icann.org/lists/icg-forum
> Charter: https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/draft-charter-coordination-group-17jun14-en.pdf [PDF, 43.7 KB]
> Deadline: August 15, 2014 at 23:59 UTC
> 
> Please view the full announcement here: https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2014-08-08-en
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