[ippm] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-flags-09: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 30 June 2022 04:33 UTC

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Subject: [ippm] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-flags-09: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-flags-09: No Objection

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# Internet AD comments for {draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-flags-09}
CC @ekline

## Comments

### S4.1.1

* "if the encapsulating node's identity is not available in
   the encapsulation header"

   Can you say a little more about what circumstances would cause the
   encapsulating node's identity to not be available?  This seemed a
   little surprising to me.

### S4.2

* I think "address of the node performing the copy" should be expanded
  to say that RFC 6724 source address selection MUST apply.

## Nits

### S4.4

* "Specificallly" -> "Specifically"

### S5

* "layer needs not" -> "layer need not"