[ippm] RE: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03 (was: ippm Digest, Vol 42, Issue 3)

Re: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03

Hi...

A few quick comments:

1) I like how section 4 separates the discussion for the delay metric
into the two points-of-view.  I would be nice to see the same format
applied to section 3 where it's not as obvious how to interpret the
discussion for each point-of-view.  A synopsis sentence in the beginning
of the section and/or at the end might help here.

2) Question: I am not exactly sure what you mean by "forks" in this
context in section 4.1.1 and again in section 4.3.  I think I know, but
I would like to be sure.  Please clarify.

3) silly comments: 

a) It would be great if we could spell out the ipdv acronym in section
4.1.3 before it's used (simply for readability).

b) 'seconds' is mispelled in section 6.2, 

c) and Gomathi's address has an extra comma in it.

Regards,

Steve

-----Original Message-----
IPPM,

This individual draft has just been revised.
The new material in primarily in:
   6.2.  Long-Term Reporting Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . 12

I hope to have a discussion of this new material at IETF-70, and any
other comments of course, so please have a look at this draft.
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-
03.txt

regards,
Al

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