Re: [ippm] RE: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03 (was: ippm Digest, Vol 42, Issue 3)

Hi Steve,

Thanks for your comments
(and for working on Saturday to prepare them).

A few quick responses, below.  I will submit the
04 version before the deadline.

Al

At 11:36 AM 11/17/2007, Konish Jr., Stephen wrote:
>Re: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03
>
>Hi...
>
>A few quick comments:
>
>1) I like how section 4 separates the discussion for the delay metric
>into the two points-of-view.  I would be nice to see the same format
>applied to section 3 where it's not as obvious how to interpret the
>discussion for each point-of-view.  A synopsis sentence in the beginning
>of the section and/or at the end might help here.

Good suggestion, 04 will have this.

>2) Question: I am not exactly sure what you mean by "forks" in this
>context in section 4.1.1 and again in section 4.3.  I think I know, but
>I would like to be sure.  Please clarify.

It's from "forks in the road" - I've clarified the intent in 04:
(4.3) ... where subsequent processing depends on
whether the packet arrives or times-out,

>3) silly comments:

Thanks, they all help.

>a) It would be great if we could spell out the ipdv acronym in section
>4.1.3 before it's used (simply for readability).
>
>b) 'seconds' is mispelled in section 6.2,
>
>c) and Gomathi's address has an extra comma in it.

Yes, so did mine, both are fixed now.

>Regards,
>
>Steve
>
>-----Original Message-----
>IPPM,
>
>This individual draft has just been revised.
>The new material in primarily in:
>    6.2.  Long-Term Reporting Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
>
>I hope to have a discussion of this new material at IETF-70, and any
>other comments of course, so please have a look at this draft.
>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-
>03.txt
>
>regards,
>Al
>
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