Re: [ippm] RE: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03 (was: ippm Digest, Vol 42, Issue 3)
Al Morton <acmorton@att.com> Mon, 19 November 2007 13:32 UTC
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Date: Mon, 19 Nov 2007 08:29:03 -0500
To: "Konish Jr., Stephen" <steve.konish@windriver.com>, ippm@ietf.org
From: Al Morton <acmorton@att.com>
Subject: Re: [ippm] RE: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03 (was: ippm Digest, Vol 42, Issue 3)
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The 04 version is now available, as promised. A URL for this Internet-Draft is: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-04.txt Al At 01:38 PM 11/17/2007, Al Morton wrote: >Hi Steve, > >Thanks for your comments >(and for working on Saturday to prepare them). > >A few quick responses, below. I will submit the >04 version before the deadline. > >Al > >At 11:36 AM 11/17/2007, Konish Jr., Stephen wrote: >>Re: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03 >> >>Hi... >> >>A few quick comments: >> >>1) I like how section 4 separates the discussion for the delay metric >>into the two points-of-view. I would be nice to see the same format >>applied to section 3 where it's not as obvious how to interpret the >>discussion for each point-of-view. A synopsis sentence in the beginning >>of the section and/or at the end might help here. > >Good suggestion, 04 will have this. > > >>2) Question: I am not exactly sure what you mean by "forks" in this >>context in section 4.1.1 and again in section 4.3. I think I know, but >>I would like to be sure. Please clarify. > >It's from "forks in the road" - I've clarified the intent in 04: >(4.3) ... where subsequent processing depends on >whether the packet arrives or times-out, > > >>3) silly comments: > >Thanks, they all help. > > >>a) It would be great if we could spell out the ipdv acronym in section >>4.1.3 before it's used (simply for readability). >> >>b) 'seconds' is mispelled in section 6.2, >> >>c) and Gomathi's address has an extra comma in it. > >Yes, so did mine, both are fixed now. > > >>Regards, >> >>Steve >> >>-----Original Message----- >>IPPM, >> >>This individual draft has just been revised. >>The new material in primarily in: >> 6.2. Long-Term Reporting Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . 12 >> >>I hope to have a discussion of this new material at IETF-70, and any >>other comments of course, so please have a look at this draft. >>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics- >>03.txt >> >>regards, >>Al >> >>_______________________________________________ >>ippm mailing list >>ippm@ietf.org >>https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ippm _______________________________________________ ippm mailing list ippm@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ippm
- [ippm] RE: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-03… Konish Jr., Stephen
- Re: [ippm] RE: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metric… Al Morton
- Re: [ippm] RE: draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metric… Al Morton