Re: [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm-pam
Bjørn Ivar Teigen <bjorn@domos.no> Thu, 20 April 2023 08:20 UTC
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From: Bjørn Ivar Teigen <bjorn@domos.no>
Date: Thu, 20 Apr 2023 10:20:02 +0200
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Subject: Re: [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm-pam
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Hi Marcus, IPPM, I've read the document. My overall impression is very good. I did find a few minor nits: Introduction: Essentially, the absence of what is, in other contexts, is called a defect. (One too many "is" in this sentence?) Section 3.1: decamillisecond is an odd choice of unit. Section 3.1: "defitions" should be definitions Section 3.2: "Time since the last SVI (e.g., since last violated ms, since last violated second)" should be "Time since the last SVI (e.g., since last severely violated ms, since last severely violated second)" Section 4 claims, "The definition of histogram metrics is for further study (see section 6)", but there is no discussion of this in section 6 I find the contribution interesting and useful and will be following this work in the future. Cheers, Bjørn On Wed, 19 Apr 2023 at 17:08, Marcus Ihlar <marcus.ihlar= 40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > Hi IPPM, > > During the IPPM session at IETF 116 the authors of draft-ietf-ippm-pam > expressed that they believe the document is ready for WGLC. > > However, since this document was adopted quite recently we’d like to ask > the WG to take some time to read the document and provide feedback. > > > > In response to this mail, please indicate whether you’ve read the document > along with any feedback you might have. > > > > Note that this is not an official working group last call. > > > > The document can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-pam/ > > > > HTML version: > > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ippm-pam-01.html > > > > BR > > Marcus > _______________________________________________ > ippm mailing list > ippm@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ippm > -- Dr. Bjørn Ivar Teigen, Ph.D. Head of Research +47 47335952 | bjorn@domos.ai | www.domos.ai
- [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm-pam Marcus Ihlar
- Re: [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm… Bjørn Ivar Teigen
- Re: [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm… Bjørn Ivar Teigen
- Re: [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm… Haoyu Song
- Re: [ippm] Request for reviews of draft-ietf-ippm… Greg Mirsky