Re: [Ips] AD review of draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-02

--- Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de> wrote:

> Section 1.2., paragraph 3:
>  >    The key is sent during operational parameter negotiation of an  
> iSCSI
>  >    session's login phase.  The intended use of this key is to provide
>  >    enhanced logging and support capabilities, and to enable  
> collection
>  >    of iSCSI implementation and usage information.  Functional  
> behavior
>  >    of the iSCSI node (this includes the iSCSI protocol logic -- the
>  >    SCSI, iSCSI, and TCP/IP protocols) MUST NOT depend on the  
> presence,
>  >    absence, or content of the key.  The key MUST NOT be used by iSCSI
>  >    nodes for interoperability, or exclusion of other nodes.  To  
> ensure
>  >    proper use, key values SHOULD be set by the node itself, and there
>  >    SHOULD NOT be provisions for the key values to contain user- 
> defined
>  >    text.
> 
>    Suggest to move the text starting with "Functional behavior..." to
>    Section 3 (Overview is not the place for this.)
> 
Agreed - thanks for the suggestion.  Fits nicely as the first paragraph of Section 3.


>    Finally - why is this going for Informational and not PS? PS seems
>    appropriate.
> 
I defer to the chair and other 3720 authors on this one.


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