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Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 16 November 2023 11:52 UTC

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From: Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com>
To: 'Daniel Migault' <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>, 'IPsecME WG' <ipsec@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [IPsec] review draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-10.txt
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Hi Daniel,

 

thank you for the review. I will look at it a bit later.

 

Regards,

Valery.

 

Hi, 

 

I reviewed draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-10.txt and provides my comments in the attached file. I am providing impressions as I was reading the text, the authors are free to ignore them. I think the document is in good shape and I tend to think we may send it to IESG in the coming future. The beginning is quite hard but then it is pretty clear. 

 

I am pretty sure I am using variations of the GCKS acronyms but it represents the same entity ;-). I have not reviewed the appendix, sections I might have to review are 4.5.3.  Member Key Bag Substructure 2.4.1.1.  GSA_REKEY Messages Authentication. 



 

Yours, 

Daniel


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