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Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 26 February 2024 13:51 UTC

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From: Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 26 Feb 2024 16:51:16 +0300
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Subject: Re: [IPsec] review draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-10.txt
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Hi Daniel,

Once again, thank you for your review and sorry for the terribly late
reply. Please see comments in the attached file (marked as <vs>).
The recently posted -11 version of the draft should address most of
the issues (if not all).

Regards,
Valery.

ср, 15 нояб. 2023 г. в 20:53, Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>:
>
> Hi,
>
> I reviewed draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-10.txt and provides my comments in the attached file. I am providing impressions as I was reading the text, the authors are free to ignore them. I think the document is in good shape and I tend to think we may send it to IESG in the coming future. The beginning is quite hard but then it is pretty clear.
>
> I am pretty sure I am using variations of the GCKS acronyms but it represents the same entity ;-). I have not reviewed the appendix, sections I might have to review are 4.5.3.  Member Key Bag Substructure 2.4.1.1.  GSA_REKEY Messages Authentication.
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> Yours,
> Daniel
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