Re: [IPsec] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6311 (3615)

This is a small editorial change, and should be accepted. The RFC Editor should add this change to its internal style guide for IPsec-related documents.

--Paul Hoffman

On May 8, 2013, at 6:05 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6311,
> "Protocol Support for High Availability of IKEv2/IPsec".
> 
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> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6311&eid=3615
> 
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> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Yoav Nir <ynir@checkpoint.com>
> 
> Section: 6.4
> 
> Original Text
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>                        Note that this solution requires that either all Child SAs
>   use Extended Sequence Numbers (ESNs) or else that no Child SA uses
>   ESNs.
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>                        Note that this solution requires that either all Child SAs
>   use Extended Sequence Numbers (ESN) or else that no Child SA uses
>   ESN.
> 
> Notes
> -----
> "ESN" is used here as a name of a feature. There is no need to pluralize it. This is different from "SAs" or "SPIs", where there are many of each.
> 
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> RFC6311 (draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsecha-protocol-06)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Protocol Support for High Availability of IKEv2/IPsec
> Publication Date    : July 2011
> Author(s)           : R. Singh, Ed., G. Kalyani, Y. Nir, Y. Sheffer, D. Zhang
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : IP Security Maintenance and Extensions
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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