Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12.txt

Paul Wouters <paul.wouters@aiven.io> Mon, 08 November 2021 18:16 UTC

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Date: Mon, 08 Nov 2021 13:16:25 -0500
From: Paul Wouters <paul.wouters@aiven.io>
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Subject: Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12.txt
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On Mon, 8 Nov 2021, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:

> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12.txt

> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12

Looks good to me other than a typo:  s/the they fall/they fall/

(but we can let the RFC editor fix that one without issuing a new draft)

Paul