Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12.txt

Paul Wouters <paul.wouters=40aiven.io@dmarc.ietf.org> writes:

> On Mon, 8 Nov 2021, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
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>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12.txt
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>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12
>
> Looks good to me other than a typo:  s/the they fall/they fall/
>
> (but we can let the RFC editor fix that one without issuing a new draft)

Thanks, I've made the update locally to keep track of it as well.

Also, Yoav flagged "is comprised of" to me off-list, so I locally changed those to "consists of". There's a subgroup of language experts that really don't like people to use "is comprised of". :)

Thanks,
Chris.

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> Paul
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Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12.txt

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