Re: [IPsec] Please review draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt

Hi Sean,

Section 5. IANA Considerations can be reworded in-line with ikev2bis.

5. IANA Considerations

IANA has already registered the type and value for AES-CTR.

Name                 Number      Defined In
--------------------------------------------

ENCR_AES_CTR         13          (RFC3686 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3686>)

Best regards,
Raj

On Thu, Mar 4, 2010 at 11:19 AM, Sean Shen <shenshuo@cnnic.cn> wrote:

> Thank you, Yoav,
> I will have it fixed, listen to this channel for other suggestions and have
> the
> revised version submitted by Mar 8th.
>
> Sean
>
>
> In your mail:
> >From: Yoav Nir <ynir@checkpoint.com>
> >Reply-To:
> >To: "'Paul Hoffman'" <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org>, IPsecme WG <ipsec@ietf.org>
> >Subject: Re: [IPsec] Please review draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt
> >Date:Thu, 4 Mar 2010 07:16:55 +0200
> >
> >Paragraph 5 of section #2:
> >    MUST accept any length that results in proper alignment.  It should
> >    be noticed that the ESP [RFC4303] Encrypted Payload requires
> >
> > Please change "noticed" to "noted".
> >
> > Other than that, the document looks good enough for implementation.
> >
> > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> >>directories.
> >>This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions
> Working
> Group of the IETF.
> >>
> >>      Title           : Using Advanced Encryption Standard (AES) Counter
> Mode with IKEv2
> >>      Author(s)       : S. Shen, Y. Mao, S. murthy
> >>      Filename        : draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt
> >>      Pages           : 10
> >>      Date            : 2010-3-2
> >>
> >>This document describes the usage of Advanced Encryption Standard
> >>   Counter Mode (AES-CTR), with an explicit initialization vector, by
> >>   IKEv2 for encrypting the IKEv2 exchanges that follow the IKE_SA_INIT
> >>   exchange.
> >>
> >>A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> >>
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt
> >
> >Based on Pasi's AD review, the authors significantly shortened the
> document. It
> seems prudent to have the WG review the new, shorter version. In
> particular, it
> would be good for developers to look at the new short document and see if
> it is
> complete enough to implement from.
> >
> >This review cycle will end in a week, but please do the review early in
> case
> problems are found.
> >
> >--Paul Hoffman, Director
> >--VPN Consortium
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