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Re: [IPsec] Please review draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt

Scott C Moonen <smoonen@us.ibm.com> Thu, 04 March 2010 20:21 UTC

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Caveat: I have not reviewed in detail.

But I noticed a typo below line 3020 -- "may hve".


Scott Moonen (smoonen@us.ibm.com)
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>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>directories.
>This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions
Working Group of the IETF.
>
>		 Title		 		 : Using Advanced Encryption
Standard (AES) Counter Mode with IKEv2
>		 Author(s)		 : S. Shen, Y. Mao, S. murthy
>		 Filename		 : draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt
>		 Pages		 		 : 10
>		 Date		 		 : 2010-3-2
>
>This document describes the usage of Advanced Encryption Standard
>   Counter Mode (AES-CTR), with an explicit initialization vector, by
>   IKEv2 for encrypting the IKEv2 exchanges that follow the IKE_SA_INIT
>   exchange.
>
>A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt

Based on Pasi's AD review, the authors significantly shortened the
document. It seems prudent to have the WG review the new, shorter version.
In particular, it would be good for developers to look at the new short
document and see if it is complete enough to implement from.

This review cycle will end in a week, but please do the review early in
case problems are found.

--Paul Hoffman, Director
--VPN Consortium
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