Re: I-D Action: draft-clw-rfc6434-bis-00.txt

Tim Chown <Tim.Chown@jisc.ac.uk> Mon, 14 November 2016 02:00 UTC

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From: Tim Chown <Tim.Chown@jisc.ac.uk>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-clw-rfc6434-bis-00.txt
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Hi Brian,

> On 1 Nov 2016, at 04:11, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for this. One small gap:
> 
> draft-ietf-6man-multi-homed-host (in RFC Editing) updates RFC 4861 behaviour
> for both hosts and routers, so probably needs to be cited where 4861 is cited.
> 
> It also interacts with rule 5.5. of RFC6724, so should possibly also be
> mentioned under Default Address Selection too.
> 
> I also wondered whether it's worth adding two Appendices
> 1) list of obsoleted documents
> 2) list of "other reading" - useful documents that are not part of the
> normative set.

These are good suggestions.

Thanks,
Tim