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Re: I-D Action: draft-clw-rfc6434-bis-00.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 01 November 2016 04:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-clw-rfc6434-bis-00.txt
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Thanks for this. One small gap:

draft-ietf-6man-multi-homed-host (in RFC Editing) updates RFC 4861 behaviour
for both hosts and routers, so probably needs to be cited where 4861 is cited.

It also interacts with rule 5.5. of RFC6724, so should possibly also be
mentioned under Default Address Selection too.

I also wondered whether it's worth adding two Appendices
1) list of obsoleted documents
2) list of "other reading" - useful documents that are not part of the
normative set.

Regards
   Brian

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