Re: [Jcardcal] Genart LC review: draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal-09

Philipp Kewisch <kewisch@gmail.com> Thu, 20 March 2014 23:26 UTC

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On 3/20/14, 11:20 PM, Robert Sparks wrote:
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>> value-separator is defined in section 2 of rfc 7159.
> Provide that reference at the point it's used in the document please.
Just above the ABNF in the introduction to the section, I write "ABNF
Symbols not described here are taken from [RFC7159]". Isn't that sufficient?

Philipp