Re: [L2sm] Next steps with draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model

Hi Adrian,

One point that I would like to raise is that it would be important to describe the relationship between this work and what is happening at other standardization bodies such as the MEF Legato YANG service modules and the TAPI work at the ONF.

Regards,
Roque

Ref MEF Legato YANG modules: https://github.com/MEF-GIT/YANG-public/tree/master/src/model/draft

On 17/01/18 10:02, "L2sm on behalf of Adrian Farrel" <l2sm-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of adrian@olddog.co.uk> wrote:

    All,

    We're approaching Working Groups last call on our draft.

    - I have requested a YANG Doctor review of the current revision
    - I plan to do an English language review at the same time (unless
       someone else want to volunteer)
    - NOW is the time for you to do your technical review. Don't leave
       is until WG last call!
    - All things being equal, we will have WG last call in early February

    Thanks,

    Adrian

    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: L2sm [mailto:l2sm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Fioccola Giuseppe
    > Sent: 16 January 2018 10:05
    > To: l2sm@ietf.org
    > Cc: draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model@ietf.org; l2sm-chairs@ietf.org
    > Subject: [L2sm] I: I-D Action: draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-05.txt
    > 
    > Hi All,
    > This is the new version of the draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model.
    > It addresses some comments from people that are trying to implement the draft
    > and it includes also an update to the references in particular to RFC8199 and
    > RFC8309.
    > As usual, the fundamental changes are summarized in the Appendix A "Changes
    > Log":
    > 
    >    Changes in v-(05) include:
    > 
    >    o  Change type from 16-bit integer to string for the leaf id under
    >       "qos-classification-policy" container.
    > 
    >    o  Stick to using ordered-by user and remove inefficiency to map
    >       service model sequence number to device model sequence number.
    > 
    >    o  Remove mandating the use of deviations and add "if-feature target-
    >       sites" under the leaf-list target-sites in section 5.10.2.
    > 
    >    o  RFC2119 language changes on operation of the management system in
    >       Section 5.6,3rd paragraph and section 7.
    > 
    >    o  Fix incomplete description statements.
    > 
    >    o  Change the use of the absolute paths to the use of relative paths
    >       in the "must" statement or "path" statement for vpn-policy-id leaf
    >       node, management container, location leaf node, devices container,
    >       location case, location-reference leaf, device case, device-
    >       reference leaf to make configuration is only applicable to the
    >       current sites.
    > 
    >    o  Change "must" statement to "when" statement for management
    >       container device container.
    > 
    >    o  Define new grouping vpn-profile-cfg for all the identifiers
    >       provided by SP to the customer.  The identifiers include cloud-
    >       identifier, std-qos-profile.
    > 
    >    o  Add in the XPATH string representation and remove unqualified
    >       name.
    > 
    >    o  Remove redundant parameters in the cloud access.
    > 
    >    o  Add a few text to clarify what the site is in section 6.3.
    > 
    >    o  Add multi-filter and multi-VPN per entry support for VPN policy.
    > 
    >    o  Modify description for svc-bandwidth leaf to make it consistent
    >       with the text in section 5.10.1.
    > 
    >    o  Add text to clarify the way to achieve Per-VPN QoS policy.
    > 
    >    o  Change guaranteed-bw-percent data type from uint8 to decimal64.
    > 
    > 
    > Reviews and Comments are always welcome.
    > 
    > Best Regards,
    > 
    > Giuseppe
    > 
    > -----Messaggio originale-----
    > Da: L2sm [mailto:l2sm-bounces@ietf.org] Per conto di internet-drafts@ietf.org
    > Inviato: martedì 16 gennaio 2018 10:46
    > A: i-d-announce@ietf.org
    > Cc: l2sm@ietf.org
    > Oggetto: [L2sm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-05.txt
    > 
    > 
    > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
    directories.
    > This draft is a work item of the L2VPN Service Model WG of the IETF.
    > 
    >         Title           : A YANG Data Model for L2VPN Service Delivery
    >         Authors         : Bin Wen
    >                           Giuseppe Fioccola
    >                           Chongfeng Xie
    >                           Luay Jalil
    > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-05.txt
    > 	Pages           : 149
    > 	Date            : 2018-01-16
    > 
    > Abstract:
    >    This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
    >    a Layer 2 Provider Provisioned VPN service.
    > 
    >    This model is intended to be instantiated at management system to
    >    deliver the overall service.  This model is not a configuration model
    >    to be used directly on network elements, but provides an abstracted
    >    view of the Layer 2 VPN service configuration components.  It is up
    >    to a management system to take this as an input and generate specific
    >    configurations models to configure the different network elements to
    >    deliver the service.  How configuration of network elements is done
    >    is out of scope of the document.
    > 
    >    The data model in this document includes support for point-to-point
    >    Virtual Private Wire Services (VPWS) and multipoint Virtual Private
    >    LAN services (VPLS) that use Pseudowires signaled using the Label
    >    Distribution Protocol (LDP) and the Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) as
    >    described in RFC4761 and RFC6624.
    > 
    > 
    > 
    > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model/
    > 
    > There are also htmlized versions available at:
    > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-05
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-05
    > 
    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-05
    > 
    > 
    > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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    > 
    > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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